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Rafique Farooqi (12/19/2009 9:51:00 PM)
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I shall nobly as you desired
Always you teased and work admired
Who knew you will leave and get expired?
Your work may lead me and thoughts aspired
I shall continue to thrive
Your spirit will live and revive
I shall make it livelier than life
Prove to be honest and dedicated wife
we have to face this situation one day or the other, The departure of loved one is apprehending, and painful
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Subbaraman N V (11/4/2009 11:42:00 PM)
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Yes; that indeed is God's inscrutable ways one has to accept! Pl. read my AFTER DEATH WHAT? in the PH.
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Rafique Farooqi (10/14/2009 6:53:00 AM)
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All the poem is very beautifully written and very clear to understand
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Sachin Goswami (9/10/2009 11:29:00 PM)
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was dumbfounded and could not cry
Asked repeatedly for what crime and why? .....10
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Winnie Angel (9/6/2009 11:56:00 PM)
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I shall continue to thrive
Your spirit will live and revive
I shall make it livelier than life
Prove to be honest and dedicated wife
Beautiful lines written from heart directly!
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Luwi Habte (9/5/2009 8:26:00 AM)
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dear am back again
how are you these times
well this is also so very interesting and nice poem too
well done dear
luwi
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Rehana Nazli (9/5/2009 6:36:00 AM)
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shall continue to thrive
Your spirit will live and revive
I shall make it livelier than life
Prove to be honest and dedicated wife
Its good self-other reflective poem byou being a man I would say...
thanks for sharing.
5/9/09
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Pandian Angelina (9/5/2009 3:51:00 AM)
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Memories live beyond the grave. A very wonderful poem, Touching and heartfelt Hashmukji.
Angel
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surya . (9/5/2009 3:21:00 AM)
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a poem sad and poigant. well composed.thanx for sharing
a 10+++ fro me
surya
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Sagarika Shah (9/3/2009 9:32:00 PM)
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was dumbfounded and could not cry
Asked repeatedly for what crime and why? ......10
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