Another Girl, But I Can'T Complain Poem by Delilah Miller

Another Girl, But I Can'T Complain

Rating: 5.0


Have you ever seen the sky,
when it's gourging with love
that clouds cover it
and the stars
shine, peeking out, like a young girl's eyes?

And then cascades of raindrops like pearls,
then another runs down your spine?
But it is not rain;
the downpour is too deliberate
and glistening like memories of all your favorite girls.

Little puddles everywhere you know,
formed by nights too beautiful to be true.
The sky wants to sum up,
size up and sympathize,
similar to when you slip your fingers across the piano,
and you squeeze my hand because you'll never let go...
Maybe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Hill 22 February 2009

lovely, really lovely poem and imagery and the stars shine, peeking out, like a young girl's eyes? 10

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Coach Roth 30 April 2008

Wow...the rhythm and imagery are first rate...but it's the passion it evokes which transcends the ordinary...I've only made a few attempts at romantic writing, after this, I will just leave it to you....Coach

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Marvin Brato 28 April 2008

Reality unveil that love can be found in many, it lingers in time, sweet to savor with another love at a time, but soon it will finally find a true love with only one! Great read, romantic and passionate love. A 10.

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