Aiesha Freela

Rookie (San Diego, California)

Another Lesson Was Learned - Poem by Aiesha Freela

He broke my heart
now its raining
try not to rub it in

You say 'I told you so'
you knew it long ago
You knew we had to go
I finally came around, back on solid ground
can't let this get me down

Yes I was burned but I'm calling it a lesson learned

My mistake was overturned, so its a lesson learned

My soul has returned so I'm calling it a lesson learned

Another lesson was learned

Falling down ain't falling down if you don't cry when you hit the floor
And it's called it past because I'm getting past and I ain't anything like I was before, you should see me now

Comments about Another Lesson Was Learned by Aiesha Freela

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kudakwashe Roak Mutama (3/10/2010 10:06:00 AM)

    it's from the heart and the statement 'Another lesson learned' has in itself a sense of healing. l enjoyed it (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Ruth Campbell (2/13/2008 1:09:00 PM)

    Yep, you made your point, but one could say it's a little repetitive.
    Ruth (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philip Housiaux (1/25/2008 8:30:00 AM)

    Very good work. A poem that is well suited to being read aloud
    with lots of nice simple thoughts that express universally recognised ideas
    and a repeating chorus that can be recited with lots of passion. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 565 Points Subbaraman N V (1/24/2008 8:23:00 AM)

    Experience, the best Master, makes us learn many, many day in and day out! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 24, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 14, 2008

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