Another Love Poem Poem by Paul Storm

Another Love Poem

Rating: 3.8


For what is said
Has been said

Words are for books
Deeds prove nothing

Unless witnessed
By the heart

Pain will remind you
Where you belong

When I utter
Once more

I love you

You will fold
In my arms

Home at last

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 26 January 2008

Enough to make a heart swoon.... well done

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Midnight Clarity 07 February 2008

Your economy of words results in images and concepts that are immediate and complete. Thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you.

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This is beautifully clear, wonderfully lovely, each word needed, nothing excess.

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James Bessant 11 February 2008

Well crafted poem with a wonderful sentiment

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Kyle Shield Laster 16 July 2008

a very touching write...

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Malini Kadir 02 June 2008

lovely as always! love is never out dated........

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James B. Earley 08 April 2008

'Unless witnessed by the heart, ' powerful!

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John Tiong Chunghoo 31 March 2008

looks like love poems are more popular than ever. good one nomi. keep going.

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Riquetta Elliott 21 February 2008

I am so in love with this poem right now. Expressing your love with this person its so real.

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