The4amPoet ....

Rookie - 0 Points (14 Febuary / LINCOLN)

Another Trip Around The Sun - Poem by The4amPoet ....

So the day has come to celebrate
another journey round the sun
but you havent really grown that much
since the day that you begun
so look on the bright side as people stare
clothes are cheap at Mothercare...lolz
but you know me better
and a poem should start
with scripted images
that project from the heart
do you remember the rythm
and my artistic style
words turn to goose bumps
then transform into smiles
So i send to you
A Birthday wish
from that grimm little town that smells of fish
and i hope that all your dreams come true
my closest friend..i guess..thats you

Comments about Another Trip Around The Sun by The4amPoet ....

  • Bronze Star - 2,142 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (5/18/2012 10:12:00 AM)

    A new day with fresh words. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 19,416 Points Ramesh Rai (5/8/2012 4:09:00 AM)

    Another trip, only a poet can think. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Jinal Oswal (5/1/2012 10:03:00 AM)

    I am a fan of your fans.... I go gaga over them... Lovely writing... so sweet... and all the love words I can ever think of are for your poems... this is a real sweet way of wishing birthday... love, humor and a touch of your emotions... Nice one :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (4/4/2012 5:13:00 AM)

    You really do have artistic style, great poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 8, 2012

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