Anyone Out There? Poem by Cleo Blue

Anyone Out There?

Rating: 4.5


Anyone out there? ....
I'd like to know...
Because no one's here.
I'm all alone.

I feel lonely
As i am alone.
And the reason is only,
Because i am on my own.

Without you here.
To hold me close.
I shed a tear,
When i'm alone.

PLease just don't leave me here.
On my own.
Anybody out there?
I'd like to know...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I am trying to make a new poem for every; etter of the alphabet but with homeschool crap i don't have enough time except late at night so i was writing them all down in a notebook and my lil'bro wanted me to sleep in his room because he was scared of the dark or somethingand i needed light to write so i sat in the hallway....anyway this is! and just tell me if i should change the name to Alone or anything else but it has to start with A.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brianna Winebarger 29 November 2012

Like the flow of it...it is pretty good. Nut I think you need to work a lil hard to express your feelings. IT is a great poem, just needs more emotion. Great job

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