Anyone, Someone Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Anyone, Someone

Rating: 3.7


Is it possible?
There is anyone without someone?

Anyone can read
the palmistry of someone's sorrow
Hidden lines of fortune are deep
A lemon-green soul is pale
Leaves fall at midnight on highway.

Anyone can perceive
pre-programmed events of play
Waiting of unkind future
Can see the happenings
That will or to be happened!

Anyone may feel
the air-wave while leaves fall
But can't reach someone's sorrow
With affection by five fingers!



Poem 02
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 19 May 2009

how if I can rate it 1000+... just justified! ! ! wonder of thoughts that you have soft questions of deep senses... and it does not make any difference if these are answered or not! ! just a 'value question' is worth a step! ! lovely work dear Ashraful Musaddeq! top rated :)

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Maria Barbara Korynt 20 May 2009

Sadness has different shades and it often keeps the man company. 'But can’t reach someone’s sorrow With affection by five fingers! ' - beautiful! I like it very much. (10v.) Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Smiley Hooker 22 May 2009

i don't think so, sir. we can feel the emptiness or any emotions because we are humans. but life isn't bad or good all the time. it's how we see it or how we appreciate it. what a beautiful poem! : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -)

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Brishti Mazumdar 05 June 2009

Anyone may feel the air-wave while leaves fall But can’t reach someone’s sorrow With affection by five fingers! ...again wonderful thought process.....Loved these lines as they tell so many things...10+...Brishti Mazumdar

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Rosalita Fernandez 11 June 2009

brilliant poem, makes you think....well penned

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Marilyn Lott 16 August 2012

Interesting description of human heart and feelings. Always is the need to love and be loved.

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Akram Saqib 10 October 2009

logical arguments run through out the poem, great effort

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Raj Nandy 30 August 2009

THE POEM BRINGS OUT THAT ABSENT HUMAN TOUCH IN OUR LIVES! Must be a translation from your Bengali verse, - which sounds great! 10! -Raj

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Sabrina Jubahar 10 August 2009

It's not possible! we always yearn to be loved, we have to be loved, we were born to loved....!

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Obed Souza 02 August 2009

Lovely, as always! You do care about life, about the inner man... 10!

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