Apart-Ment Hunting Poem by Susan Lacovara

Apart-Ment Hunting

Rating: 5.0


Who knows the hours
Of evening showers
And drying flowers
From a lover, sent
When tales of love
I thought were meant
How, now, I wish I could
Afford the RENT
To continue leasing
The quiet cabin of your heart.

Tuesday, May 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(05/24/16) Remembering the dried lavender, and you. M.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theodora Onken 07 June 2016

Susan, perfect use of metaphor; Understand all too well, the empty sorrow that a broken relationship brings! Feel all of your emotions and feel for you! Love your poetry.

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Kishore Kumar Das 24 May 2016

Susan, your stylish poetry describes the means of intruding your lover's heart through the language of apartment......beautiful conception......10 marks to you..

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