Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 4,717 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Apollo Sleeps (Sonnet) - Poem by Valerie Dohren

The sable sky devours the dying sun
Apollo sleeps, thus silent be his lyre,
So I shall sleep, for now the day is done
And shadows fall beneath the fading fire

As Luna softly smiles upon the night
Apollo sleeps, with laurel wreath adorned,
And darkness takes his place to steal my sight
The closing of the day forever mourned

For blinded thus, my soul no longer sings
(Apollo sleeps, the poet’s heart then stilled) ,
All thought has flown upon celestial wings
My heart no more to dance, no more fulfilled

Apollo sleeps, I pray that he shall wake -
My spirit, life, and soul, no more forsake

Comments about Apollo Sleeps (Sonnet) by Valerie Dohren

  • Gold Star - 19,125 Points Amitava Sur (7/1/2014 6:46:00 PM)

    A beautiful sonnet with an amazing imaginary, you brought in deity like Apollo, the God of poetry and literature. very nice, Valerie... loved it. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,518 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/7/2014 10:08:00 AM)

    I love this poem with beautiful imagery and brilliant lines that are so thought provoking! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,576 Points Daniel Brick (4/11/2014 5:33:00 AM)

    I revere the ancient Greek deities, for me they are not dead but live within the psyche. A book by the German scholar Walter Otto called THE HOMERIC GODS has informed my viewpoint. So my POV on Apollo is the beautiful but terrifying god who appears in the ILIAD. Your poem has refreshed me with an entirely different POV. Herein Apollo is the god of poetry, the one who inspires humans, and he too sleeps like all of us. I'm sure this sleep and yours and mine will be the sleep which restores the tired mind, fills it with new energy and prepares it for the next poem upon awakening. I can almost guarantee it; your sonnet gives that confidence. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 386 Points Oladehinde J. Ibikunle (1/26/2014 4:37:00 PM)

    Great work of art here. You've got the words and the pen at your reachable disposal. Nice ma.
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  • Rookie ..... W@king Up..... (7/5/2013 5:35:00 AM)

    Awesome! I wish there was no end to this mesmerising sonnet: (

    -W (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 234 Points Lucifera Santez (6/18/2013 6:58:00 AM)

    such sweet melody............... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,048 Points Kevin Patrick (6/13/2013 9:05:00 PM)

    Great subject for topic, it feels very much like a forgetting work that was found in an attic, the words jut drift so naturally to each other. No more forsake your light is bright. the sun god himself would find this a fitting tribute in his honour. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 886 Points Reyvrex Questor Reyes (6/12/2013 10:09:00 PM)

    Very worthy sonnet. very well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (6/11/2013 8:30:00 AM)

    A lovely poem that shines to the hearts (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points G.R. Gaus (6/8/2013 11:27:00 PM)

    Apollo has indeed become my Sun God, since choosing to live on Solar Energy, When he sleeps my batteries suffer, when he wakes all is well in my delicate little world. I also pray that he shall wake again and again. Nice touch Valerie, the Sun is life itself...... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,957 Points Lorraine Colon (6/5/2013 4:18:00 PM)

    There's something enchanting about the way you write. Truly beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,456 Points Valsa George (6/3/2013 1:00:00 AM)

    For blinded thus, my soul no longer sings
    (Apollo sleeps, the poet’s heart then stilled) ,
    All thought has flown upon celestial wings
    My heart no more to dance, no more fulfilled

    Beautiful concept! The thoughts flown upon celestial wings will definitely come back to the poet to take her to ever loftier heights! ! Greatly enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,685 Points Hazel Durham (6/2/2013 9:46:00 AM)

    Beautifully written with great panache! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,151 Points Paul Brookes (6/1/2013 4:55:00 PM)

    Great sonnet 10/10 BB: O) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (6/1/2013 6:50:00 AM)

    Apollo also needs to sleep. Lovely poem Val. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,722 Points David Wood (6/1/2013 5:30:00 AM)

    A lovely sonnet Val, inspirational. There is something special about a sonnet, keep writing them. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,127 Points Dave Walker (5/31/2013 8:57:00 AM)

    A fantastic poem with a wonderful flow. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 31, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, May 31, 2013

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