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Family is where you run to
when wolves start to hunt you
Its your lasting shelter
when Life gets colder
Family hold you tight
when your tunnel has no light
They cure your wounded Wing
when things start to Sting
That's what i've been always told
but i started to believe this image is Old
Cause sometimes they are the Pain
and with them Anger is what you gain
when you search for their warm arms
They throw you back to the Storms
They drive you to confusions
Till you get that Conclusion
'How can I call you Family?
How can I say you are part of me? '
'If all you do is Judging me
and control my own Destiny'
Im Sorry
Near you i never want to stay
Im Sorry
I can't Keep acting in That Play
Im Sorry
You are my Reason to Runaway
Sarah Ibrahim ©
Sarah Ibrahim
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Sunday, February 10, 2008 |
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Wednesday, July 15, 2009 |
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Comments about this poem (Apology
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Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/5/2009 6:03:00 AM)
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the stanza method do suit the theme nicely and vividly
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tara star (1/31/2009 2:34:00 PM)
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Nice composition, , with true meaning, , , keep it up!
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sumaira .....ir (1/19/2009 3:24:00 PM)
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Lovely writin! .. but never run away frm yer family thy r gud or bad wat ever thy r part of u dear..
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/27/2008 6:06:00 AM)
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How far can you run? Nobody is indispensable................the farther you run.....the deeper you'd fall...........apart!
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Hazem Al Jaber (10/25/2008 2:33:00 AM)
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beautifull dear swet sarah.. heartfelt..
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Ershad Mazumder (10/15/2008 9:21:00 AM)
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Excellant interpretation of family. Thanks sarah for sharing this with us.
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Sarwar Chowdhury (9/20/2008 2:06:00 PM)
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...with ryhm/rythm thoughts expressed finely................10
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