Appreciate Poem by DeAngelo Smith

Appreciate

Rating: 4.5


How can a women be so fine but yet so ugly?
When a man does what he can and she still has the nerve to get grudgy.

It makes no since, how a women feels the need to want.
As if her looks can change the perspective of what her man acheives to get what she want.

A man will do his best to keep his women at a glow.
No man, who loves his women, wants her outdoors, looking like a hoe.

A women should appreciate all the things a real man does.
A real man takes care of home and Maybe, get your hair and nails done. Lol

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alicia Smith 26 September 2008

Oh wow... And these comments are hilarious lol

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 September 2008

This is a very good poem Smith. It has such inner tones, that make the reader really enjoy it thoroughly.......Some kind of naked truth...very revealing. You can read my GUILLOTINE, SUPPRESSED TRUTH, ATONEMENT & WE'LL MEET. They have similar tones. I hope you appreciate them

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