Aquasports Poem by Bob Oldfield

Aquasports

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So now I understand...
Your eyes became too big for your belly
You wanted extra helpings
Of everything
You desired desire
And then submersed yourself
In its wash

You went swimming
Where the water looked fresh and appealing
But now,
Hopelessly out of your depth
And carried along by undercurrents
You call for help

Is anyone listening?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

This poem is too deep for me. But I enjoyed the read. I'll probably spend a little time pondering these lines as I question its meaning. Peace, L&T

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Moya Levy 02 April 2006

I'm well out of my depth Bob! Nice poem! Moyaxx

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