Are We Angels Or Demons Poem by Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel

Are We Angels Or Demons

Rating: 5.0


ARE WE ANGELS OR DEMONS

Are we angels or demons
Priest's wasted sermon

Demonly damnation
Or heavenly salvation

Since our early creation
Exists devilish temptation

To left side we are torn
But rightly we were born

Each life one day dies
Mourning and cries

In this earthly life of being
One can not be forseeing

Devils brings the fear
How can we bear

The height of cross
Deep into the moss

Where do we come from
What is to be eternal home

Are we angels or demons
Priest's wasted sermon

Demonly damnation
Or heavenly salvation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I think we are a little bit of both-being only human.And we can make choices between doing good or evil.nice rhyme stiulating philosophical poem a ten from me.

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Alf Hutchison 21 July 2009

Carmen this is very well penned... enjoyed it immensely..Regards Alf

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Akram Awadat 19 May 2009

very nice poem, well done

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

'Are we angels or demons Priest’s wasted sermon' We should be angles, alas! mostly we act as demons. Nice verse, you have lucidly expressed a deep idea. Added my 10 to it.

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Gordon Wilkinson 20 March 2009

i guess i am the demon - well written - 10

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Emma Pearson 20 March 2009

Very well written, great comparisons =].10 x

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