Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel

Rookie - 37 Points (11.06.1960 / Philippines Manila)

Are We Angels Or Demons - Poem by Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel

ARE WE ANGELS OR DEMONS

Are we angels or demons
Priest's wasted sermon

Demonly damnation
Or heavenly salvation

Since our early creation
Exists devilish temptation

To left side we are torn
But rightly we were born

Each life one day dies
Mourning and cries

In this earthly life of being
One can not be forseeing

Devils brings the fear
How can we bear

The height of cross
Deep into the moss

Where do we come from
What is to be eternal home

Are we angels or demons
Priest's wasted sermon

Demonly damnation
Or heavenly salvation


Comments about Are We Angels Or Demons by Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alf Hutchison (7/21/2009 3:16:00 PM)

    Carmen this is very well penned... enjoyed it immensely..Regards Alf (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Akram Awadat (5/19/2009 1:47:00 AM)

    very nice poem, well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/12/2009 11:48:00 AM)

    'Are we angels or demons
    Priest’s wasted sermon'

    We should be angles, alas! mostly we act as demons.
    Nice verse, you have lucidly expressed a deep idea.
    Added my 10 to it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gordon Wilkinson (3/20/2009 11:32:00 AM)

    i guess i am the demon - well written - 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emma Pearson (3/20/2009 8:35:00 AM)

    Very well written, great comparisons =].10 x (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,675 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (10/29/2008 10:48:00 AM)

    I think we are a little bit of both-being only human.And we can make choices between doing good or evil.nice rhyme stiulating philosophical poem a ten from me. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 29, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 11, 2012


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