Are We Living In An Illusionary World! ! ! Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Are We Living In An Illusionary World! ! !

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Are we living in an illusionary world?
Or
Our mind thinks not much about it!
this sun never sets nor move from its place
stars are stationary so do the moon and galaxy
It is we moving around
For some it is sunrise for others it is sunset
For some nights are dark
For some days are bright

In this illusionary world
Seasons play their game well
Winter running after summer
Summer submerge in to rains
They all standstill and we move

Our emotions are not stationary
Our age is not stationary
If we cut through and become
Like sun or moon probably
We may become immortal like them.

Tuesday, October 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: illusion,life,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2015

So nicely envisioned and beautifully depicted. A brilliant poem I like most. The favourite lines are....all....10

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Liza Sudina 13 October 2015

illusionary world - don't take it seriousely, as any moving thought!

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Zuzu Mutairi 02 August 2020

Wonderful poem. Nicely written

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T Rajan Evol 14 October 2015

Two subjects handled carefully in this poem..Change and Illusion and the similarity between them is wisely defined.

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 October 2015

I like the theme of your poem. One thing we know for sure, is that nothing stays the same, everything is a perpetual change.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 14 October 2015

Verily, the world is an illusion, what seems, is not and what doesn't seem, is there.....10

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Kelly Kurt 13 October 2015

Reality is subjective, I agree. Thanks, Mohammed

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