Are You Ready For The Answer Of The Broken? Poem by Black Rose Night

Are You Ready For The Answer Of The Broken?

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The breaking sorrow.
The pain of holding it all in at once.
The thoughts rushing at the speed of light.
Heart cracking in ur ears and chest.
The world around u that once looked so bright...
Now dims to a black.
Everything thing u once loved.
Gone.
Broken.
Dead.
How can one move on from this? ?
The answer lies deep within.
The heart will mend.
The mind will scar.
All traces left for tomarrow.
All this pain and sorrow.
Will fade.
Will die.
Then what will be left?
Are you ready for that answer?
Look deep inside.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darkness J 18 September 2009

Personally, there will be nothing left without pain or sorrow, cos we won't feel joy without sadness or pleasure without pain, like no life without death. Antonyms should always rule :) and it's a vicious circle of contradictory feelings all the time. Nice poem! ! Gave it a 10.

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Broken Heart 28 July 2009

waoo...great poem! ! keep it up 10 frm me

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