Manonton Dalan (virginia, usa)

very good, i can see guiter chords in this poem, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

i like the 'bowing your head' part
it is like i am watching a scene while outside a window

marundunong ka
bali bali

thank you for reading my poem 'hair less'
haha gabay kon naramdaman ya manmaliw ya gwapo anggano magano labat

touching and lyrical; good poem, Manonton

open my window
to let my soul
wander
in search
for you, .thius is how u loose your patience when you donot find your loved one.....
it is beautiful poem.. to the point dear.....10

read mine... i miss.... Mary to marry..... miss i miss u

Very good! the first three verses remind me of 'The Song of Wandering Aengus'. The last: a modern version of it. Well done!

Cute and lovely.10++

very cool its seem like u lost someone