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Are You Taking.....?

Are you taking patience's test?
Want to lick the life's best taste.

Love gave me terrible punch,
Enjoy on loss drinking Punch.

Vagabond red runs thru vein,
Your proud stamp is almost vain.

Free now from the firm shackle,
World calls don't try to shackle!
Nilakshi Das

Submitted: Friday, September 28, 2012


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  • * Sunprincess * (9/29/2012 10:57:00 AM)

    don't think anyone could shackle you..for you are a free spirit..love the poem.. :)

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  • Vipins Puthooran (9/29/2012 9:48:00 AM)

    excellent rhyme words/beautiful poem! !
    top markss! !

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/28/2012 10:59:00 AM)

    Test of patience herewith.Tester versus tested and patience in tug-of-war.

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