Aren't You Love! Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Aren't You Love!

Rating: 4.7


Having almost passed a life,
and waiting for the death,
when I analyze it,
if it was a success or a failure,
I ultimately conclude,
I was alive only,
in the moments passed in love,
the rest were passed in coma.
I shall ask humbly.
My Lord!
I am accountable to you,
but will you interrogate me,
for my life that was passed in coma,
shall it be just?
Interrogate me about the moments
when I was alive and conscious
but in those moments
I did nothing,
I loved only loved.
Aren't you love!

Sunday, August 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 25 August 2016

What a lovely poem....! I am awed by your thought..... 'I was alive only, in the moments passed in love, the rest were passed in coma.'............. So beautifully put! A sure 10

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 22 August 2016

great salute Sir.......life is nothing without love....one can not imagine life without love.

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Abduhoo Salamath 22 August 2016

excellent poem....what a love description...nice..

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Bharati Nayak 22 August 2016

A wonderful write ! Love is what gives us reason to live.Thank you for sharing the beautiful poem.

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Kelly Kurt 21 August 2016

We are each allotted only so much time and most of it seems to be wasted, or at least not appreciated to its fullest. The time spent sharing love is indeed the most valuable

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