Existential Despair (8/29/2008 7:36:00 AM)
An amazing piece you've created here. Brilliance is etched behind every sentence revealing wisdom hidden beneath...nice |
Fay Slimm (8/1/2008 11:22:00 AM)
The title caught my attention Jim. The message was at once vivid and exposing t the lack of humanity on this forlorn earth. Made me sigh for the future. So well and simply presented. Greetings from Cornwall U.K. Peace and love from Fay. |
Mandy Garnett (6/19/2008 5:18:00 AM)
I felt every word.....you write with such passion... |
Hazel Elliott (6/1/2008 10:15:00 AM)
Compassion...such an amazing word. May every heart feel compassion and love for their fellow man...before there is no tomorrow on the horizon. Wonderfully written poem, Jim....Hazelmarie |
Ivor Hogg (4/4/2008 1:21:00 PM)
there is no guarantee that the sun will rise We live hopefully that, that will be the case.. just perhaps our purpose in being is to hope for improvement both personal and as a race. We may reach enlightenment at least we have to try |
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