Captain Cur

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Armored Hawk of War


Parapets feint amongst the dawn's cruel violent skies,
blue toned mountain meadows shade brooding endless streams,
mirror lakes engulfing highland weeping pines
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  • Veteran Poet - 3,025 Points Diane Hine (7/31/2014 8:57:00 PM)

    When you turn your mind to pure adventure, great things happen. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 602 Points Shahzia Batool (6/27/2013 4:26:00 AM)

    mirror lakes engulfing highland weeping pines //
    Red spired cathedrals invade the mounting morning mist; //
    Diving swoops regains the breeze turning quickly falls,
    pushing currents, backward strokes then rests within our walls. //

    these are the lines in which i saw the scenes...
    the poem is an answer to the question...what is the richness of diction? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,713 Points Gajanan Mishra (2/8/2013 7:26:00 AM)

    mystic lion
    Pushing current
    I like it. thanks. (Report) Reply

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