Around Poem by Joanne Kearsey

Around

Rating: 5.0


Happened to be there by chance as always,
Not like the others I have become tired and slow,
Making this choice from variations that are not there,
Small, neat and rounded to the simplicity of a virtue,
Walking in lines and in circles again,
Whilst selling type in new forms of negation,
No need for rhyme and reason as it all comes undone.

Decline the negatives for something more substantial,
Open interpretation of a type less formal,
As its lost appeal in subjective insanity,
Un-conciously aware of the plot that's unfolding towards ourselves,
Gaplessly licensed than censored through aesthetical reach.

Frosted over by the invention of word extensions,
Answering the demands by the default of denomination,
Prompted in subliminal ways through messages that are so blaringly obvious,
As repitition of the same ideals which bores us continuously without thought or meaning.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 23 November 2009

Un-conciously aware of the plot that's unfolding towards ourselves, Excellent philosophical poem, very well written. The similes, the anti-similes and metaphors are very well used to convey the message. 10++++++++++

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Joanne Kearsey

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Brighton, England
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