Around My Words Poem by AMITAVA MAZUMDAR

Around My Words

Rating: 5.0


(I saw my tears rippling down in the streams
I found all my pains dancing in my dreams)

(1)
In a white uncrumpled paper, I would
I could do so before, my stumbling mood
A standalone shadow, when overlaps another
Gets some space finally, like a good neighbour
However exhumed, without any trace to follow
Deep inside so much, ne’er to glow-

(2)

When the window shuts, without any force
I found myself, locked up in an unmined source
Everything precious, well-handed with preciseness
But I dips and drops in a black unholiness
Still something would, perhaps after many winters
I may behold that, without a drop of single feathers

(3)

The paper white as an ivory flutters up sometimes
But nothing I could put, as fresh as limes
When a bird I saw wandering above in vain
Weariness the word I prefer and a thankful strain
The golden streaks and luminous fragments of evening
But I couldn’t capture to get something a little simmering

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the pain that stungs a poet when he fails to scribble
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2017

The golden streaks and luminous fragments of evening But I couldn’t capture to get something a little simmering very fine poem.. you have actually described the pain when you as a poet are not able to scribble what is in your mind, and what wells up in your consciousness, very fine poem thank you

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 March 2016

The golden streaks and luminous fragments of evening But I couldn’t capture to get something a little simmering amitav mazumdar.. The struggle of a poet when he engages himself in writing. dear poet you have excellently brought to life this struggle. thank you very much. tony

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2013

Wow. Wonderful write. Loved reading it.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 31 July 2013

good poem with good imagery thanks for sharing

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