Tsira Gogeshvili (11/14/2008 6:32:00 AM)
About to sleep through winter's cold,
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. It is a fine metaphor,
Around the lake the trees surround
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.........Brilliant picture..
10...
Tsira |
Kesav Easwaran (8/12/2008 8:47:00 PM)
The fall out of leaves is compared to falling of whispers...yes...leaves do whisper to breeze...draped in the shade of morning light, the weeping willow stands mourning...good poetic imagery...impressive work, Andrew...nice to read 10/10 |
Bonnie Collins (7/3/2008 11:24:00 PM)
Andrew, what a beautiftull way of describing the onset of winter/end of summer. Anticipation of what mother nature has in store...... This is a wonderfull piece of nature penned with so much tenderness.....
Bonnie |
Hemakumar Nanayakkara (4/29/2008 7:02:00 AM)
A beautifully described scenery. A most enchanting nature poem. I enjoyed reading this brilliant work.10 |
Duncan Wyllie (2/27/2008 5:57:00 PM)
A bouquet of colours, brilliant scenery Andrew
Love duncan X |
Ernestine Northover (2/25/2008 8:06:00 AM)
Superb. Autumn splendour here in all its entirety. Wonderful read.
Love and hugs Ernestine XXX |
Jeannie Ann Clark (12/23/2007 2:22:00 PM)
'A whisper of the summer gone
As they fall without a sound.'
How beautiful this poem is...Thanks again...10. |
BEAU GOLDEN (11/20/2007 5:24:00 AM)
the embodiment of poet here with all the trimmings, wow, and such a visual visceral treat! |
ANDREW BLAKEMORE
