Art Poem by shafeeqrahman rahman

Art

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As I saw the candle
fading it`s glow
my palm just revolved
it round.

As it got the strength
to glow independently,
it burnt my finger...
Ouch... how cruel you little candle.

Sunday, October 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
seeing the cruelty of cute candle...I thought of the mankind who are mere acrobats...then simply wrote without any second thought...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 29 July 2016

I loved reading it. Concluding line is beautiful..

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Akhtar Jawad 19 November 2014

Hazrat Ali said if you oblige someone beware of his cruelty in response. A nice poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 November 2014

Hazrat Ali said if you oblige someone beware of his cruelty in response. A nice poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 October 2014

When candle was dying you curl your palm as a savior fence to save, this is the divine act you performed, when candle squired the vigor to glow for the light..it did't burn you..think kissed yo, bear the pain of divinity..as he thanked you for the act..thank you nice poem kudos 10

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Gajanan Mishra 19 October 2014

how cruel you little candle, good writing, thanks.

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