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(19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

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Artificial Things (Sextuple Senryu)

Artificial breaths,
Like mimicking feelings of
Love with empty souls,

Artificial love,
Like sex mimics of drugged, raped
Girls, being in chains,

Artificial sex,
Like mimicking life in the
Dolls for making love,

Artificial life,
Like raping dead women to
Sate sadistic needs,

Artificial need,
Like rape mimics during sex
For excitation

And excitations,
Like artificial breaths for

Submitted: Thursday, May 31, 2012
Edited: Thursday, May 31, 2012

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This poem is dedicated to the poetess MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI, after reading her poem ''I WANT TO BE RAPED''

Note: Necrophilia
= obsession with and usually erotic interest in or stimulation by corpses (Merriam Webster) and also
=1. Obsessive fascination with death and corpses.
2. Erotic attraction to or sexual contact with corpses.(Farlex dictionary)

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  • Liliana Roman (8/17/2012 10:23:00 AM)

    that was awesome. i had to read it twice to get a full understanding.

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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (6/28/2012 9:46:00 AM)

    An awful situation portrayed here. Clearly upsetting.

  • Ravi Sathasivam (6/16/2012 12:53:00 AM)

    Great poem. Agree with your thoughts madam. Well done. tfs

  • James Merchant (6/9/2012 2:46:00 AM)

    For some reason, the graphic portrayals you display in this poem work perfectly, in morbid harmony. Bravo!

  • Kebe Iwara (6/8/2012 1:56:00 PM)

    Nice. i appreciated it a lot. It is an interesting improvement on Nivedita's. U summed up a lot of things too and i agree with u.

  • Sagar Shelar (6/7/2012 11:50:00 AM)

    Your poem is not artificial, it comes
    from your heart. Im totally agree with your thoughts. Masterpiece of heart. Well done. Keep it up friend & please invite me for your new poem.

  • Kellsey Hartmann (6/6/2012 8:42:00 AM)

    I can imagine there is a rape that often because I know a few people that have been and I hope I'm lucky enough to never be. I believe that sex should be saved for one that you love and I thInkbthat you illustrated how that is true quite beautifully.

  • Allemagne Roßmann (6/5/2012 4:30:00 PM)

    Its where smell of death becomes erotic mozzarella of eroded minds.Explosion

  • Allemagne Roßmann (6/5/2012 4:29:00 PM)

    Its where a smell of death becomes mozarella.Well represented.

  • Allemagne Roßmann (6/5/2012 4:27:00 PM)

    Erstmal bei Ihnen habe ich anweisungen für getötete Sex gelernt.Ein gute Genuß.Richtig super.Echter Gedichtschreib werden von viele Erfahrungen so schlechtes raffiniert.

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