Marieta Maglas

Veteran Poet - 1,244 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

Artificial Things (Sextuple Senryu) - Poem by Marieta Maglas

Artificial breaths,
Like mimicking feelings of
Love with empty souls,

Artificial love,
Like sex mimics of drugged, raped
Girls, being in chains,

Artificial sex,
Like mimicking life in the
Dolls for making love,

Artificial life,
Like raping dead women to
Sate sadistic needs,

Artificial need,
Like rape mimics during sex
For excitation

And excitations,
Like artificial breaths for
Necrophiliacs.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is dedicated to the poetess MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI, after reading her poem ''I WANT TO BE RAPED''

Note: Necrophilia
= obsession with and usually erotic interest in or stimulation by corpses (Merriam Webster) and also
=1. Obsessive fascination with death and corpses.
2. Erotic attraction to or sexual contact with corpses.(Farlex dictionary)

Comments about Artificial Things (Sextuple Senryu) by Marieta Maglas

  • Rookie Liliana Roman (8/17/2012 10:23:00 AM)

    that was awesome. i had to read it twice to get a full understanding. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,156 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (6/28/2012 9:46:00 AM)

    An awful situation portrayed here. Clearly upsetting. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (6/16/2012 12:53:00 AM)

    Great poem. Agree with your thoughts madam. Well done. tfs (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 110 Points James Merchant (6/9/2012 2:46:00 AM)

    For some reason, the graphic portrayals you display in this poem work perfectly, in morbid harmony. Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 148 Points Kebe Iwara (6/8/2012 1:56:00 PM)

    Nice. i appreciated it a lot. It is an interesting improvement on Nivedita's. U summed up a lot of things too and i agree with u. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sagar Shelar (6/7/2012 11:50:00 AM)

    Your poem is not artificial, it comes
    from your heart. Im totally agree with your thoughts. Masterpiece of heart. Well done. Keep it up friend & please invite me for your new poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kellsey Hartmann (6/6/2012 8:42:00 AM)

    I can imagine there is a rape that often because I know a few people that have been and I hope I'm lucky enough to never be. I believe that sex should be saved for one that you love and I thInkbthat you illustrated how that is true quite beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (6/5/2012 4:30:00 PM)

    Its where smell of death becomes erotic mozzarella of eroded minds.Explosion (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (6/5/2012 4:29:00 PM)

    Its where a smell of death becomes mozarella.Well represented. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (6/5/2012 4:27:00 PM)

    Erstmal bei Ihnen habe ich anweisungen für getötete Sex gelernt.Ein gute Genuß.Richtig super.Echter Gedichtschreib werden von viele Erfahrungen so schlechtes raffiniert. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,194 Points Saadat Tahir (6/5/2012 9:48:00 AM)

    You have touched a raw and festering wound in the soul of humanity.....where protectors turn perpetrators. Where man is a wolverine … at the borderlands of man and no man…! ! !

    It is indeed so important to talk about it on all forums, drum up support and whip up action to erase the scourge from the face of this earth….
    From the time of Cain and Abel to the writings of Marquis de Sade and Leopold von Sacher-Masoch…..mans insatiable delve into the myriad mazes of Fetchesim and bestiality cause one to wonder…what is man….

    What deep and dark leanings lurk within the upright primate...one could go on and on to write about these twisted twines
    suffice here to say.....

    You have done a great job at highlighting some of these issues…..i hope it blossoms into meaningful and fruitful discourse here and else where.

    Blessed be
    tc (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Prateep Sengupta (6/5/2012 4:11:00 AM)

    I think is a perfect poetical match to the poem of Nivedita. These are not only the poems of different taste and perception but also very relevant in the contemporary scenario. Thanks for daring and sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 112 Points Young Church Poetry (6/5/2012 1:34:00 AM)

    Great poem, a very good flow with great message. Without love souls become so godless they never do the right thing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,244 Points Marieta Maglas (6/4/2012 6:10:00 PM)

    I received, at least, Nivedita's comment.
    From:
    Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism ~ Why? ? ? ] Bagchi Spc Uk (UK United Kingdom; Female; 30)
    To:
    Marieta Maglas
    Date Time:
    6/1/2012 4: 06: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject:
    Re: hello

    Dear Mari

    Comment on your poem 'Artificial Things'

    Its wonderful poem and I appreciate the boldness you've shown and UN-masked the civilization

    Sex is 'Musk' [from male musk deer] a perfume what women love much

    But when becomes masked...oh! ! bejesus! ! ! ...let it never happen to any woman

    You've hit very hard the necrophilia [it is used as metaphor] to describe Mal-Handle and Man-Handel of sex

    Now the slogans of day ‘SAY NEVER NO TO SEX’ by any menace and every menace

    Dangerous situation we women in [in US every 2-3 minutes there is RAPE...can you imagine? ? ? ]

    When it'll end?

    PH banned my poem I Want To Be Raped unfortunately for them and fortunately for us it was lifted

    I think we must trounce poetically or by biblio or by cinema or by talk show or by drama or by road show etc etc [like Occupy Wall Street or Slut Walk (as symbol) etc etc] to polish off [Finish a task completely] the ancient menace

    I'm honored for your kindness of dedication such a great poem in fact I'm a wee poet

    Must be 10++ ~ Regards ~ niv

    +++

    May I request to comment on Memo To Missy...if please
    n

    PS Unfortunately I'm constrained from posting my comments under any given poem in spite of repeated effort...may be as a poem I'm distaste to PH you'll find many comments of my poem Mom By Default Rape [was banned next was lifted] and my reader AB of London helping me to post my In Box posts what come as comment...I'm smothered by such actions
    n (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 121 Points Terry O'leary (6/4/2012 9:09:00 AM)

    Perverse sensuality vividly expressed...Our whole society has become artificial as it dies... nice poem...Terry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lenore Lee (6/3/2012 6:30:00 PM)

    Stunning. It is true that these people have a problem with their brains - they do not actually love, as you say it is all artificial. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,219 Points Ken E Hall (6/3/2012 5:23:00 PM)

    Sums it up but artificial love is no kind of love not even bestiality its the devils advocate...regards (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (6/3/2012 5:14:00 PM)

    Good poem. Its worths dedicating to her. I read her poem also (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 136 Points Romeo Della Valle (6/2/2012 8:09:00 PM)

    For hundreds of years women have been raped and abused by males that were and still are protected by the maximum authorities of every land on Earth! The best we can do so far is to increase the awareness about this great problem affecting humanity. This well crafted write clearly echoes your concern and support for our great poetess Nivedita Bagchi. Thank you for sharing and keep it up! 10+++ God Bless you and every woman on Earth! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 32 Points Samra Haq (6/2/2012 4:59:00 PM)

    Well its a very strange & interesting poem.Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 31, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 31, 2012


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