Treasure Island

Tadasha Tripathy

(19/12/93 / Sonepur, ODISHA

As A New Feedback


The blasting below the first step
Is the cause of stillness
Legs want to go ahead
Steps wait to take to high
May be with a new blast again.

The reward of first word
Is the cause of unlimited silence
Lips want to deliver the heart
Mind wants to speak again
But may be the first reward
Wait as a new feedback
At a step ahead.

Submitted: Thursday, August 08, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, August 28, 2013

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