As A New Feedback Poem by TADASHA TRIPATHY

As A New Feedback



The blasting below the first step
Is the cause of stillness
Legs want to go ahead
Steps wait to take to high
May be with a new blast again.

The reward of first word
Is the cause of unlimited silence
Lips want to deliver the heart
Mind wants to speak again
But may be the first reward
Wait as a new feedback
At a step ahead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 08 August 2013

deliver the heart, very fine, I like it.

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TADASHA TRIPATHY

TADASHA TRIPATHY

Sonepur, ODISHA< INDIA
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