As Foe Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

As Foe

Rating: 3.3


“Life” to me as it seemed
Was dark and deemed
It needed more and more
Time with thrust to explore

With means available
With all kind of hurdles
It was no easy task
It needed concerted efforts with good start

Time and tide both must favor
As life is to be lived with honor
It must look as if graced
Really gifted and happiness is chased

Any venture may pay little
Yet it may have posed no problem
It is dedicated effort that brings result
To show the world that quality is really inbuilt

Sea must be looked to you as foe
But that shall not deter you to go
The tides may threaten with life even
But shore may certainly appear all of sudden

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 November 2013

great Juma Rashid41 minutes ago I like the line Sea must be looked to you as foe But that shall not deter you to go Comment +1 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 November 2013

Crystal Yvette41 minutes ago I like it! !

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Ashutosh Pandey 04 November 2013

The meaning behind the poem is good, however the syllable count is a bit of a throw off!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 November 2013

“Life” to me as it seemed Was dark and deemed

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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