As I Remember The Rainbow Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As I Remember The Rainbow

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Breath when sheathed by the web of ebbs
I still remember the rainbow by the blue moon
Your ripples when slither by the resonance
When you flossed into the moon
by the rainbow when blurs

blood when turns to tears by the fire
yet the thunder crakes the earth elsewhere

love when falling ruefully across the dew
Red of the blood yet whirls fast in the heart
White when blemishes my god innate
Images delve deep into your dreams as blotted

when I embrace blue when unabashed
Death when conquered by the dream
As you slowly melted to mingle into the waves
I keep on benign look to the mist when reflexed

yet I am never alone even if lie lonely
by your reminiscence from the truth
as day when dies bereft of sun by the shadow
night when cries out for the moon when alone

yet deep dark night turns to the light
the scar unflappable when sparks in me
the outcry besotted may diffuse my quest
the mute flow of the silence touches you nearer

as you steeped in blue by the eyes in the evening
still your song in allegiance promises me of my love.
As the speckles of your whisper touche me ever
And your sparkled eyes rebound within eternal

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 14 March 2008

subhendu, beauteous displayng a sinserity genuine feeling... thanks, Tsira

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Vaibhav Shah 25 March 2008

A complex nature poem.Quite contrary to the feelings of WordsWorth when he says: 'My heart leaps up when I behold a rainbow in the sky' but really in a polished way, you have tried to recollect 'emotions in tranquility'.Excellent job.

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Coreena Dejesus 23 March 2008

I hope to one day have an ounce of the talent you have, beautiful powerful poem

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Duncan Wyllie 22 March 2008

You show us such beauty of language, the love comes through Thankyou for this Love duncan X

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Abha Sharma 19 March 2008

areally powerful work and definitly flawless

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Emancipation Planz 14 March 2008

Now here is a rainbow I could ride.... Subham, hope your week has seen the sun come out again for you, kindly Deana xx

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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