As I Trail Behind The Shadow Poem by Dr subhendu kar
As I Trail Behind The Shadow
AS I TRAIL BEHIND THE SHADOW
Looking you standing there amidst the crowd
I trailed behind your extended shadow
To seep the grace that haunts me ever
Razz ling glaze in the grain of rain
Yet with baited breath by the beauty
I went into the dream
peeling all my sorrows
For a moment when intense
As the rainbow across the sun
Before the rain sucked twilight
That happens to happen in the midst of blue
I stood a while and ran to smooch me again
The moment passed like a twinkling of an eye
When all my dreams spread like banyan tree
Across the green meadow of the legions
You simply melted into the void like mirage
'Yet with baited breath by the beauty I went into the dream peeling all my sorrows For a moment when intense...' The finest display beauty of soul... Thank you Kar... 10+......... Tsira
Delightful! I love the last stanza, a fine ending to a poem that has universal appeal.
Dr. another beautiful sad and sorrow behind....I felt every words the hurt in your heart.
very good poem but the last word may be reconsidered for a better in place.nice reading
Yes.. there are many opportune moments that 'happen to happen' and your 'grain of rain' has got be be my favourite 'poetical sprinkle for the day'...xx
This truly is a Beautiful piece...an inspiring one that makes a reader want to read more! You are so Good at writing with amazing imagery! 10/10 As Always I anticipate reading more of your work very soon. Take care of U my friend.... Shelley
A poignant description of a fleeting moment of bitter-sweet intensity that lingers in the mind of the reader. Love your title - a fitting metaphor for unrequited love. A soft poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A dreamy write of love, a mellow and capturing poem! Thank for sharing! ! Best Regards Friend Thad *10*! !