As Our Love Grows Poem by lisa parks

As Our Love Grows

Rating: 5.0


As our love grows
it will be stronger
then what it is
now.

We would be
a lot happier.
We would be
doing a lot of
things that we
haven’t done yet.

I am glad where
we are...
Because if we
weren’t together...

Then we wouldn’t
fall in love..
EVER with anyone!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 24 March 2007

Lisa, this is quite lovely. You have a lovely rhythm to this poem that grows the longer you read into it. I really enjoyed it. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it. David

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