***as Quietness Flows Onshore*** Poem by Dr subhendu kar

***as Quietness Flows Onshore***

Rating: 3.0


in an afternoon summer still too hot
heart when cries by the pain of fire
let the rain come by the clouds of colors
when crooning yet bestirs from long years
the scarlet reds when clanks in claret

in fact rain drizzles by the dream of desire
earth meets the showers by the hanging thirst
the wetly fragrance expands when emits
sweetness of soul overwhelms by moist earth
when rain rattles across the golden rays of the sun

the captive quest cascades by the redemption
is it the quintessence of queries longing so long?
marvel when flows in unison of love and fear
is it the onstage waiting from dawn to misty hours?
greenness when clasps the shadow of the grin

dazzling glows overlaying the opal gemstones
radiating colors across the opacity of darkness
rainbow bedecks blue when entreated by the sky
breeze blows onshore onto the thunder quirks
oneness breath faster by the earthly resolution

is it the definition of love overreaching the passion
yet it overpowers the earthly sojourn yet organic
orifice when exalted by the moist cry by dissolution
is this the way back of pegions home coming?
quietness when flows onset over the quiescence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 19 May 2008

A lovely and bedazzling poem of beauty as it flows, captured wonderfully through your words and penning Dr. Kar! Best regards, Friend Thad *10*! !

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Abha Sharma 20 May 2008

The beauty showered in the lines is really mesmerizing where souls are blessed with such graceful natural beauty… Soul sweetened by moist earth… Where musical rain drops rattle With the brightness of sun……..very impressing. Abha

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Marieta Maglas 01 August 2009

wonderful descriptive poem of nature, well embedded feelings and deep thoughts, lovely to read..10+++++++++

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~ Jon London ~ 02 June 2008

Everything about this fine write, whispers into the readers ears....look how pretty i am...smell my sweet scent....enjoy this time with me....let me flood your mind with a wash of colour and lushes loveliness.........'10' from me Doc best wishes Jon

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such a colourful write... so much alive... I like your alliteration: 'quintessence of queries' - interesting vocabulary proving your eloquence...Your imagery is wonderful - it adds a great embodiment to the whole piece :)

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Emancipation Planz 28 May 2008

Excuse my rudeness... but I have kept this in my favs.. in its condensed version (first of each line.. in this instance... I need no more) in an afternoon summer still too hot rain drizzles by the dream of desire the captive quest cascades by the redemption dazzling glows overlaying the opal gemstones is it the definition of love overreaching the passion .. quietness when flows onset over the quiescence.

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Subbaraman N V 20 May 2008

When 'quietness flows on shore' how else it can be! Great creation!

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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