As Shadow Of Love Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As Shadow Of Love

Rating: 4.3


As shadow of love yet not eternal
when we slumber winking stars
dream comes latching on to the love
as love and laughter being coursed genial

yet in our times as resourced from genesis
sheltered by the heart weeing the blood
as being shined as fragrant rose.

love when obsessive reasoned earthly
yet clapped out ebbing the tide
as demurred by the obsolescence
like shadow coursed from the sun
As listlessly waning from dawn to dusk

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 14 October 2007

Dr Subhendu! Another very good write! Enjoy reading your poems! ! ! A (10) ! ! Thad

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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi 16 October 2007

wow i love this one. it is well written. thanks for feeding our hearts with beautiful words well written

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Sandra Fowler 18 October 2007

Excellent title. And the content of your poem does not disappoint. Write on, my poet friend. As always, Sandra

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Meggie Gultiano 18 October 2007

Another wonderful piece of yours, Dr. love this..thanks for sharing! hugs, Meggie

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Marieta Maglas 21 July 2009

nice simile: ''As shadow of love yet not eternal when we slumber winking stars dream comes latching on to the love '' excellent lyric poem..10+++

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Melvina Germain 28 October 2007

Very beautiful words spoken eloquently from a truly gifted poet. Thankyou so much for this wonderful piece Dr. Subhendu Kar.--Melvina--

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Patrice James 19 October 2007

its a very lovely vesion, top marks.... Patrice

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Ewigi Liebe 19 October 2007

As a shadow of love...when we slumber winking stars...when the light comes shinin' from the sky and the tears are drying from our eyes.....as the final chain is broken by. will breathe on and drive away our fears. Its beautiful....thanks for sharing, Mary

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Marvin Brato 19 October 2007

A poem characterized by subtlety! Thanks Doc, Top marks.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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