As Sun Sets Low Poem by Doris Cornago

As Sun Sets Low

Rating: 5.0


Seized by the whirligig of delight
Prancing about in pure might
You were a vision in black
Taken you out on a ride
A frisky daring steed
Hardly stopped on
Steep upclimb
Grip slipping
Ventilating
Oxygen
Eyes
On
Goal
Almost
Reaching
Promontory
Frictions freak
Things suddenly
Agitated, distracted
Tipped to the left side
Heavyweight mires you
Character flaws hit us low
Asked me please step down
Willingly sent you on your own
Meet as sun sets low on horizon

As Sun Sets Low
Tuesday, April 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: challenges,lifespan,race,renewed hope,sunset,together
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When we find someone with whom we want to spend our life with, we can tolerate momentary friction and separation believing we will again meet at journey's end.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 25 April 2018

Dear Doris, such a heartwarming poem....10+++++

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Doris 26 April 2018

Yes, it is. Thank you for always affirming.: -)

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