As To Poem by delilah contrapunctal.... yes, that's how I intended to spell it.........

As To



the
bric a brac
on
my clavier....
some, gifts....
.......excavational 'debris'........
an open-air reliquary....

enhancing sounds? ...
..............yes
....memories...ideas
all but instantaneously
translated,
into colors, phrases...
.which
could be named..... do not need to be....
.they'll ask, if necessary.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 December 2009

this one is good... i think you should just arrange the form properly. but don't take this comment negatively. this is really good.

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