As We Speak - Poem by ANNE P LadeeAnne MURRAY

As we speak, our minds race through
The hopes, the possibilities of just what might have been
Secretely, we thought that maybe after years apart
There may be that magic, that special moment
where we both wanted the same thing at the same time

Love mixed with fear, pain mixed with pleasure
Me, you, the total of us together, forever

It felt so familiar, It felt so right
But, there were times it felt frightening, risky
I'm fearful of trying, even one more time
What do we do, who goes first with the declaration?

Ask me, please ask me first
For I'm a coward, I'm afraid

Comments about As We Speak by ANNE P LadeeAnne MURRAY

  • Rookie - 177 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (9/2/2008 11:12:00 AM)

    This is an excellent poem....deep, analytical, emotional....' who goes first....' tremendous impact. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (9/1/2008 7:06:00 PM)

    This is one I can recommend to anyone. These poems are a real pleasure to read.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,054 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (9/1/2008 4:31:00 PM)

    Loved mixed with fear, pain mixed with pleasure.
    Me, you, the total of us together, forever..................................wonderful poem by the life, yet with innovative metaphors that really connects soul when wrougt ingeniously,10+, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 1, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 17, 2012

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