As We Speak Poem by ANNE P LadeeAnne MURRAY

As We Speak

Rating: 4.7


As we speak, our minds race through
The hopes, the possibilities of just what might have been
Secretely, we thought that maybe after years apart
There may be that magic, that special moment
where we both wanted the same thing at the same time

Love mixed with fear, pain mixed with pleasure
Me, you, the total of us together, forever


It felt so familiar, It felt so right
But, there were times it felt frightening, risky
I'm fearful of trying, even one more time
What do we do, who goes first with the declaration?

Ask me, please ask me first
For I'm a coward, I'm afraid

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 02 September 2008

This is an excellent poem....deep, analytical, emotional....' who goes first....' tremendous impact.

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 September 2008

This is one I can recommend to anyone. These poems are a real pleasure to read. GW62

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Dr.subhendu Kar 01 September 2008

Loved mixed with fear, pain mixed with pleasure. Me, you, the total of us together, forever..................................wonderful poem by the life, yet with innovative metaphors that really connects soul when wrougt ingeniously,10+, thanks for sharing

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