Ajay Seshadri

Rookie - 19 Points (01/03/1983 / Chennai)

As Windows Open (Sitigotyo) - Poem by Ajay Seshadri

A strange visitor of mine was quite upset,
Sharing his distress with me our feelings they met
Ventured in love to express midnight empathy;
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Comments about As Windows Open (Sitigotyo) by Ajay Seshadri

  • Rookie Chettur Aishwarya Shrivastav (8/9/2012 1:49:00 AM)

    i loved this poem sir.. u write very well.. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,371 Points Bernard Snyder (8/8/2012 9:25:00 PM)

    Wow! I love this poem Ajay! Great rhyme scheme also! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,730 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (8/7/2012 6:59:00 PM)

    it is rare we befriend pain as we do gladness
    He is just a visitor a prince of darkness.
    well expressed lines based on Indian culture and attitude, because very simple things can make you and I happy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 173 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/21/2010 3:28:00 AM)

    ‘If we treat him with disdain the stay is for sure
    Now the emotion is lost to days too obscure! ’ ~ Touchy lines …yeah it so happens when situation goes out of reach…light will come next day but with another ‘strange visitor’ vibes… thanks for sharing
    Ms. Nivedita
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/16/2010 11:14:00 AM)

    Great metaphor. Loved the imagery, so well penned! Enjoyed; D (Report) Reply

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