Ash To Ash Poem by Charles M Moore

it's really sad................

Sad but yet true to some. Patricia

The speaker says all this so ruthlessly and unmitigatingly as well...which is all part of the poem's force. Strong poem. Warm regards and a score of 10 from Gina.

Too bad we don't know what we have until we lose it. Then if we could just go back and do it a better way..........Always let people know how you feel so you never regret the things you didn't say. Regards, Linda

Touching little ditty. And thanks for your kind comment on my poem. Best wishes, Gina.

the other comments u recieved just took the words out of my mouth.. i read sum of your other poems.. and i like your writing style.. it shows that you are an educated writer.. with deep thoguhts and emotions.. withthis poem in particular.. i commend you for it as a whole.. it shares almost a story.. at the same time it is not very long.. as others have said it shows how a person missed their chance.. and now weeps.. and mourns for another.. to undo the nothing done you could say.. just keep writing.. keep self expressing.. keep doing and being you: -) *debbie*

Powerful. Subject-wise, mood, rhymes - all perfect. Could identify with this theme too easily, I'm afraid. 10. -chuck

Very good flow and musicality and deep feelings.I liked it. I got nice imagery in your poem.Good job!

There are times when we wished we'd done more or could change an aspect of what has come before.Great Write, so much truth.Love Duncan