Ashamed! Poem by Becky Ginn

Ashamed!

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A dark cloud appears before me
Blocking out all that I could see
You carry on and think that all is fine
You don’t hear the clues or see the sign
I cry alone while you walk past
You think it’s a phase and that I’ll last
But I’ve lost the will to carry on
The hope and love is there, but gone
I can’t remember how to laugh or smile
Been salty tears and silence for a while
I’d love to tell you just how I really feel
But I’m too ashamed to admit it’s real
I just stare blankly into space
A constant struggle constant race
I want to go on, I want to win
But my heart is weak, it just gives in
I know im not perfect or right in everyway
I might not do the right things or know what to say
So what if you hate me I really don’t care
I like to be alone with nobody there
The more people around me the more alone I feel
In a world of my own where nothing is really real

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charlie Button 05 November 2006

.... these clues, we pick up on but choose to ignore. (not sure what I am tying to say but that part means something to me! ! ! !)

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Scarlett Treat 02 September 2006

There seems to be some ambiguity about this poem, like the line about love and hope being there but gone. I doubt very much the person in the poem really wants to be alone, but is putting on a brave front?

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