Ashes Of Love Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Wow! Impressive! The rhymes..the words..the emotions! It's really great! ..are you really 20? ...

I really love the rhyme scheme in this. I find it hard to rhyme without sounding light and somewhat childish, but you manage it beautifully.

Your poems are fantastic! Keep going on, you're fabulous. Please could you comment some of my poems. That's will be a honor for me.

Wow! IT's a really great poem!

i love your style.... your works are great...feelings are express really from heart very convincing enough for every reader to feel the pain...very touching and soulfull.....more power...more splendid write to share with us... Merry Christmas.....

Awesome! You express yourself very well, a descriptive poet! I know, cause we have many things in common to our poems.. I'm inviting you to visit my poetry!

Wow, I’m touched, impressed and speechless. It’s very deep, strong and gloomy. Your words are golden and your idea is unique; it’ll stick in the mind of your reader for ages. I’m NOT exaggerating but seriously this is beyond amazing and I think you are a great poet with a great natural talent. Keep up the good work I wouldn't change anything

Hi Blue eyes, your poems are very much real and experiences that i relate to through thought or real life. I like this poem, your a great poet

Startling originality. Written with music and passion. 10, from me. Kind regards, Sandra

excellent. really enjoyed reading this