hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 19,895 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Asking with smile

You have asked it with smile
that made me to sink for while
it was as if felt as sincere call
i was prepared to scale a wall

I had never gone
the magic was already done
it was one of the pride moment
i too felt it as heavenly sent

I know you never asked for roses
you were at pain to express losses
believe me it was honest and sincere
I was willing to say with you here

You were not looking for it
Still I could see bright light
your eyes expressed it clear
You only whispered to hear

It was natural pull
I felt it deep and in full
It was not at all a deception
I too went for it without any option

Any one may feel going down
It will be decision of their own
it is not physical or any other attraction
no can afford to made addition or subtraction

I know it is going to be long way
still it is compulsion to be little away
If God willing, it may prove to be reality
The love has got its own sphere and ability

It was never a problem with me
I was at ease and feeling free
I could read it in your eyes
You held it firmly to express and try

Stay well as and where you are
I may be away and little far
It does not change the good start
You were really shining and looking smart

It spoke well and responded
It was nearly to be bonded
make it sure you are same person
I shall go with you without any reservation

Submitted: Friday, October 29, 2010

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