At A Loss Poem by SALINI NAIR
At A Loss
This drop makes a blot inside
Lost past that throb itself
A lazy gust lifts somewhere
Disastrous plot of life unknown
Once the sovereign of a system
Dictator of breeze its way
Pampered by a mighty hand
Cheerful than a pearl in shell
Abundant hopes that drift its way
Converted part that mourn itself
On the wings of a loss inside
A detached leaf of wood beside
Life may mired down in awhile
Life may burn in next sunshine
Drift of life feel in senses
Desperate life floats worthless
A detached life is painful always
Always grieve inside aimless
Loiter in the yard of losses
In search of a past revamp itself! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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A detached life is painful always Always grieve inside aimless Loiter in the yard of losses In search of a past revamp itself! ! ! A beautiful nostalgic poem which describes the inner pains.Well expressed well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.l.
A detached life is painful always Always grieve inside aimless Loiter in the yard of losses In search of a past revamp itself! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A detached life is painful since it involves detaching oneself from our innate tendencies. Thoughtful thought indeed.
Some losses shatter the life completely. It's a nice and powerful description of such a loss.
Love is a powerful being, indeed life's soul when that is gone life looks like a fallen leaf drifting here and there to be buried at last.........amazing write.....10
When there comes an irreparable loss, we feel life getting mired and all our enthusiasm dying out! The agony and frustration of life are poignantly brought out! A powerful write Salini!
Each line is meaningful. Exquisite composing. Many thanks dear madam.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Whole poem carved beautifully each stanza is wonderful theme chosen is urgent requirement for the dying world - This drop makes a blot inside Lost past that throb itself A lazy gust lifts somewhere Disastrous plot of life unknown thank you for share