Alejandra Moreno

(3-4-96 / Dallas, Tx.)

At a War of Love


I'm at a war
A war of love
Right now I am quite confused
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  • Justin Unanue (1/19/2010 4:08:00 PM)

    I am at War with Love. So I can understand you War of Love. I hear its worth it, but don't take it to the bank. (Report) Reply

  • John Knight (12/30/2009 3:53:00 AM)

    Hi Ivette - First let me say this is a beautifully structured and written poem. Which scores TEN. I like the fact that each verse begins with the same couplet 'I'm at war - A war of Love'. V 1 - That's a problem we all have V 2 Love is confusing V 3 Wellwhen we are growing up love iis broad and transient it saves us form making mistakes V 4 Don't worry there is always plenty of time for love! V 5 The search for love lasts throughout our loves - but don't think of it as a problem - it is a beautiful journey! Love you in Poetry - JOHN X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points g black black (12/29/2009 11:28:00 PM)

    whoo ivette that awesome im pround of you, you are only 13 year old and you can say mature stuff, i will say that in my mind you are a very strong woman be pround man
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  • Rookie - 96 Points Romeo Della Valle (12/29/2009 9:10:00 PM)

    Dear friend, you can not possibly fight two wars at the same time, obviously, you have decided not to fight the war in your mind...You are already assuming things that have not yet happened, since you are not given it a chance...Just, let the music plays, what is really meant to happen, will happen, then you will cope with it, that is part of growing up, we all go through that stage in our lives, you are not alone! Que sera, sera! What will be, will be...You will be surprise when you reach the age of 25 and you look back, hello, what a surprise! God Bless You and Family,10+++, HAPPY NEW YEAR! Love and Peace, Romeo (Report) Reply

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