khadija shaker


At dusk I'll rise


You are overwhelmed and frustrated within,
You always just seemed to be on my side
But inside of your heart lies,
The untold truth that is
Shinning on your eyes.

You always want to put me down
Trying hard to decrease my happiness
Gossiping about me is meaningless
But still at dusk I’ll rise

Those teardrops are heavy to fall
From my fragile eyes
This word is slowly killing me
Whispering around my self
But still like dust i’ll rise

Do you want to write me down in history with your lies?
Weak heart, knowing-less mind
You are trying to spill blood on my dreams
Unbelieving the words i say inside
But still like fog I’ll rise

Wanting me to feel that my life is almost over
There is no point of living
But still like dawn I’ll rise

I’ll fly
Far from those mind
Far to inhabitant word
With those broken wings
I’ll rise
I’ll rise
I’ll rise

I’ll continue flying
Till I reach the oasis
Where the luster sparked
My intense emotions building up
My feeling is sky hope to reach
As I walked out and in
I’ll forever rise



March 25

Submitted: Thursday, March 26, 2009
Edited: Friday, March 27, 2009

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  • Gold Star - 20,878 Points Chinedu Dike (11/23/2014 12:40:00 AM)

    An inspirational poem, written with conviction and insight to capture the essence of the piece. A well articulated piece with a powerful message - FAITH. FAITH KEEPS THOSE THAT KEEP THE FAITH - Mother Teresa. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 263 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (10/15/2009 1:48:00 PM)

    Compelling and enjoyable read. Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie *_sakura ~daisy_* (10/1/2009 7:55:00 PM)

    I Love this poem! ! ! !
    Its so expressive such feeling and pictures
    Good Job^^ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,595 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/5/2009 8:44:00 PM)

    I’ll continue flying
    Till I reach the oasis
    Where the luster sparked
    My intense emotions building up
    My feeling is sky hope to reach
    As I walked out and in
    I’ll forever rise............... i will rise with the rising of yellow sun with al high hopes disregarding what otheres did to me.. this is philosophy of life....you got to go alone andnever beafraid of what is happening to yu.. it is good sign also....10

    read mine ....you go alone........go back......sun (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aziz Alkaabi (9/2/2009 6:04:00 PM)

    First, I welcome you here.
    I agree with Mubeen and I think this is one of your finest, so far.
    You have a nice poettess hiding in you and she will reveal more of her creativity and talent in times to come.
    Good work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mubeen Sadhika (8/30/2009 9:38:00 AM)

    Its a nice work. If you put some hardwork you'll get a good grip. Basically a good poetic feeling. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lacie Wasserman (6/10/2009 2:11:00 PM)

    This poem is AMAZING! :) I really like it. Keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (6/10/2009 1:57:00 PM)

    lovely poem
    ill fly and fly and fly
    the sky is the limit
    -10 anjali
    (do read mine MY SMALL LITTLE SECRET) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Angelic Warrior (5/28/2009 12:19:00 PM)

    you write beautiful words...simply enchanting...your poem speeks and unspoken story.....nice work :)
    10++ (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,548 Points Is It Poetry (5/19/2009 2:53:00 AM)

    The sky shall, know the breadth of your wings, the people will be as ants to your feet, from you they will ask for life, you will give them depth of heart and mind...iip (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (5/8/2009 1:00:00 PM)

    I’ll continue flying
    Till I reach the oasis
    Where the luster sparked
    My intense emotions building up
    My feeling is sky hope to reach
    As I walked out and in
    I’ll forever rise..................yeah u shall rise like a phoenix................a good write.......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (4/30/2009 2:56:00 PM)

    Beautifully and exquisitely written.10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/21/2009 6:37:00 AM)

    the flow fits perfectly.. and the poem..amazing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (4/18/2009 7:30:00 AM)

    Yes my friend............you shall rise like phoenix.................Good Write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ash Moore (NEW POEM!) (4/9/2009 11:45:00 AM)

    this one is amazing, yes, thankyou for pointing this one out. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~Just Fine~ (4/9/2009 11:38:00 AM)

    nice writing.... thanks for bringing my attention to this...
    keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (4/9/2009 11:07:00 AM)

    very similar to Maya's, 'Still I Still'.. You get your inspiration form good places.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 141 Points Muhammad Ali (4/9/2009 10:13:00 AM)

    it is nice poem friend khadija
    keep on writing hmmm
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Isadora (a.k.a. Izzy) Dark Blood (4/9/2009 10:07:00 AM)

    i know the feeling. i've had that feeling for more then five years now.and i realy like this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sid John Gardner. (4/4/2009 3:11:00 AM)

    Self belief is at issue here Khadija.We must be true to ourselves.Have to be strong in adversity.No matter how badly we are treated, keep our dignity and strength of will to succeed.Your poem describes determination and the will to come out on top no matter what..A great write Khadija..well done.
    Sid. (Report) Reply

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