At Least Thats What I Tell Myself... Poem by simply here

At Least Thats What I Tell Myself...

Rating: 4.9


I tell myself you didn’t hurt me
I tell myself I’m cool
I even think I’m fine
But I know none of its true.
I tell myself to hate you
Because you made my heart ache
I tell myself it doesn’t matter
Because it was all fake.
Fake from the beginning
Yea, the very start
So fake it’s hard to admit
All the pain in my heart.
I tell myself it was phony
I say it was never true
All to try to hide the fact that
I only think of you.
I think of you everyday day
Can’t seem to get you off my mind
Everything reminds me of you
Reminds me of all the good times
Yet I still tell myself you didn’t hurt me
I tell myself I’m cool
I even think fine
But I know none of its true.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
anonymous one 31 January 2008

hey.. this i like this 1 tooo <3...10/10

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X X 21 February 2008

i really dont like this because its more of a ramble about your feelings instead of somehtign with any meaning to it.

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Lylyanna Pilewski 04 January 2007

Aww remins me of me at one point of time not too long ago. great poem touching aching. Lylyanna

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Alfredo Jacques 20 January 2007

I just wanted to say Beautiful poem. great write.

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Samantha Hawkins 10 May 2007

Thatz real tight u gots a talent...

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Quin Faas 03 November 2009

Nice Piece. Title is sincere...like it!

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Nangula Immanuel 14 August 2009

wow! i love this on! It's something that I've felt but could never express as well as you just did! Great stuff! ! !

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L0$t 0n3 11 November 2008

hmm i wasnt aware poems had to even rhyme let alone have the same rrhythm. but thanks i appreciate ur comment..

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Me you 08 November 2008

Not Bad, if you work on the sytax like how Its supposed to bound from one line to the next it would be great. Like Ryhem one Blah Ryhem two Blah Something like that

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some body 07 September 2008

first to the other person who commented if u want to leave a comment better be a gd one this poem is great i like it very much and a poem is a ball of feelings and feelings are never meaningless keep on writing your poems have a unique rhym ok too much talk just great poem: D

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