Shouvik Roy

Rookie - 3 Points (26th january 1992 / Kolkata)

At St. Vagrant Road - Poem by Shouvik Roy

I loved roads,
A hobby since old times,
Every road was known
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Comments about At St. Vagrant Road by Shouvik Roy

  • Rookie Kamal N. Baruah (7/6/2012 1:37:00 PM)

    Oh my god, I don know u but I know u r great..... It is so vividd... So realistic, so artistic, so much natural... I can read ds poem thousand times n never get bored... Its jus d awesome work of u... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 7,730 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (7/5/2012 9:07:00 AM)

    St. Vagrant street is a creation of my own, wrote shouvik Roy,
    That is all I want, Shouvik Roy. Because Indians do not let another Indian go naked, unless he is mentally retarded, so that another Indian is not in a position to help him. I have been to many parts of India, but I had never seen a scene as you described here..
    Thank you for the explanation, which many of the poets would not do here and I appreciate your sincerity. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 160 Points Wabi Sabi (7/5/2012 3:38:00 AM)

    it is a very sad pom meanwhile giving away a thought-provoking. what you want to do about it must be the key to not only a better society but also this poem sounding better (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Shouvik Roy (7/5/2012 1:03:00 AM)

    What makes you thing i haven't dreamed of it? you are right, we hallucinate, and if you ask, i would say its in india or if it doesnt satisfy you yet, i would say it's all in my mind, and St. Vagrant street is a creation of my own, all of india is naked (even if they have millions, you know what I mean) , so i don't need to say much...thank you for your time...
    there are many streets in kolkata were you will find beggars lined up and yelping for money...but i haven't copied the entire scenario, a bit of exaggeration is always allowed, isn't it? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,730 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (7/4/2012 8:46:00 PM)

    Poets are dreamers and sometimes they hallucinates. During such hallucinations they forget the facts and figures. Could you please Identify this St. Vagrant street, where the beggar are naked, all of them, nearing the end. Is this street located in Calcutta or all over India or in London or in New York?
    The concept of this poem is good as you like to put it clear that the ordinary person on the road is as bad as a beggar, because he too has no money, (but at the same time when you like to shadow something, we have to shadow the things based on the same category. When you shadow the first paragraph for the bad thing, second good, third for bad. What is the meaning for the shadow?)
    The information in the bracket is irrelevant to this poem. Isn't it? Just like that, the 'additional spicy part' is not relevant to your poem at all, because there is no truth in it.... If not for that controversial part, I could have given you full marks.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (7/4/2012 3:11:00 PM)

    Amazing poem once again I love the way you write the way so simply and beautifully give us the readers such visual expression I can feel this one so deep, feeling it and seeing it! Thank you! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Shouvik Roy (7/4/2012 12:47:00 PM)

    facts and figures as in? (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,512 Points Unwritten Soul (7/4/2012 10:31:00 AM)

    A good intention could be good enough for next step, as for smile to share is like a donation from heart to heart to ease in other eyes...Dont be too cruel to others as we dont also want to get cruel by people..a simple equation we do if we want to please people like they want to do to us, but we should never ask for the same..and sincerity is the most's like a gem among the sand_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,730 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (7/4/2012 10:21:00 AM)

    Of beggars lined up by the street,
    Naked, all of them,
    Nearing death,
    Could you please explain with facts and figures? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (7/4/2012 10:12:00 AM)

    Shoubhik no word to express.I just imagined the scene that the person with empty pocket, and the beggar, they don't have any difference then.Wonderful! (Report) Reply

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