At Sunset Poem by Alice Diana Boboc

At Sunset

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The rustling of the skin - a shadow over which the clouds fall
in a bundle of slow movements
the leaves touch each other with kisses
over one another - over and over again - among dew / rain / crying drops
among the wet hair strands and lowered genes
the roots intertwine - fingers clenched in the glances
nervures thrill
images overlap with no past
in which time is waving sensual at sunset

Saturday, June 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 30 June 2018

'images overlap with no past in which time is waving lasciv at sunset' - nice imagery. But what is the meaning of 'lasciv'? Didn't find the word in the dictionary.

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Alice 01 July 2018

I meant ”lascivious”, but I changed it with ”sensual”. This word it's much more appropriate. Thank you for your appreciation, Mr. Khairul Ahsan!

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Alice Diana Boboc

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Bucharest - Romania
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