At The Beginning Poem by Kaede Rirunaru

At The Beginning

Rating: 5.0


I met you, at the beginning,
Just dreaming, where I must go on,
And you always remind me,
This road not always go on like what I want,

Crowd that made me lost,
But you stay in my heart,
Always be my imagination,
To show me the light road,

You tell me if I get wrong,
You help me to understand,
How precious my dreams is,

Even I must turn back at the beginning,
Start once again for anything,
Against all the dangerous,
And be my eyes,

Be my hand,

Be my soul,

At the beginning,
You Smile, You Still, ,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

There is so much emotion in this poem and it pulls at my heart. There is a yearning within you that is expressed so well in this poem. Very well written! .....Karin Anderson

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Min Sia 06 December 2008

So emotional..powerful..lovely..heartwarming... Great imagery..the words so clear and smooth! One of the best! ! !

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 November 2008

I wanna be your heart and soul, givin you joy and bliss! ! Good writes Rurunaru. I luv yer name!

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Kaede Rirunaru

Kaede Rirunaru

Surabaya, Indonesia
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