At The Beginning Of A Winter Poem by indira babbellapati
At The Beginning Of A Winter
strangely the environs
wore a deserted look
though it's homeward-time
on a mildly chill road
a vehicle or two passed
by us on that early evening
as gentle and visible
darkness descended
we walked in silence
on either side of the ambling road
nothing really pressing upon us
we assured the other
of one's presence
as we once in a way
...looked at each other!
29oct2009
11.21hrs
the presence really meaningful..............and very nice..................
the others stanza were just happenings..the last one shows existence...beautiful
Nice way of welcoming winter.... Both comforting and reassuring. A sweet 10.
Lovely! Beautiful poem! I like this very much..Let Spring comes & stay in our lives for ever..
'nothing really pressing upon us'...yes; the distance between helps out...parrellel lives...joint journey nice work...thanks...10
'We walked in silence on either side of the ambling road' Rachel Ann Butler
Winter is indeed a bleak time. Vitamin D3 does lift your spirits!
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 3:52:54 AM # 1.0.0.1119
last stanza is a masterpiece........as long as we can make our presence felt to others (family, friends) , the world would be a better place to live in.... really a nice and sweet poem............10