lily peace lago every by to ph

(live in universe arakonam)

**At the brink of our eyes**


At the brink of our eyes flowing abound in us
a solitude sonnet born from our heart
and the bubble in our eyes never burst
and the biggest emotions never explored..

The fastiduous waves
chasing one another
dashing the shores in ablation
the unsaid love within us to explode....

Yet, the tremulous nerves
set ablaze the magnificient eyes
where the unsaid love in us,
at the brink of our eyes enjoyed in calm..

Submitted: Wednesday, November 11, 2009

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  • Rookie - 135 Points Antonio Liao (11/25/2009 12:21:00 AM)

    silent of the immortality of the soul gallops the vision of this poem.....full of
    memory to share, just a remembrance of time....the post hoc of present down
    to the last day of our stay...its life to remember forever, through out eternity
    .....thank you for sharing...a 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 135 Points Jyoti Saxena (11/23/2009 1:20:00 AM)

    'and the bubble in our eyes never burst' the emotion in these words are so strong and so well propounded that one can almost feel it -and live it -you have given words to the sensation which was otherwise hard to express-thank you rago for sharing them. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 436 Points Ranjit Ravindran (11/11/2009 3:09:00 AM)

    Unsaid love... some times its understood, sometimes misunderstood and at most times not understood!

    liked these lines:
    ...........................................................
    where the unsaid love in us,
    at the brink of our eyes enjoyed in calm
    ........................................................... (Report) Reply

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