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**at The Brink Of Our Eyes** - Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

At the brink of our eyes flowing abound in us
a solitude sonnet born from our heart
and the bubble in our eyes never burst
and the biggest emotions never explored..

The fastiduous waves
chasing one another
dashing the shores in ablation
the unsaid love within us to explode....

Yet, the tremulous nerves
set ablaze the magnificient eyes
where the unsaid love in us,
at the brink of our eyes enjoyed in calm..


Comments about **at The Brink Of Our Eyes** by lily peace lago every by to ph

  • Freshman - 791 Points Antonio Liao (11/25/2009 12:21:00 AM)

    silent of the immortality of the soul gallops the vision of this poem.....full of
    memory to share, just a remembrance of time....the post hoc of present down
    to the last day of our stay...its life to remember forever, through out eternity
    .....thank you for sharing...a 10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Jyoti Saxena (11/23/2009 1:20:00 AM)

    'and the bubble in our eyes never burst' the emotion in these words are so strong and so well propounded that one can almost feel it -and live it -you have given words to the sensation which was otherwise hard to express-thank you rago for sharing them. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Noel Horlanda (11/17/2009 1:03:00 AM)

    the first and second stanzas are well written and meaningful, lovely indeed...cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (11/11/2009 4:37:00 AM)

    Marvelous composition my friend.........lovely dear! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 876 Points Sadiqullah Khan (11/11/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    unsaid love..................................... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ian Bowen (11/11/2009 3:19:00 AM)

    Some excellent lines in your well written poem.10/10
    Regards.
    Ian (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ranjit Ravindran (11/11/2009 3:09:00 AM)

    Unsaid love... some times its understood, sometimes misunderstood and at most times not understood!

    liked these lines:
    ...........................................................
    where the unsaid love in us,
    at the brink of our eyes enjoyed in calm
    ........................................................... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 11, 2009



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