At This Moment..... Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

At This Moment.....

Rating: 5.0


At this moment means a lot for me

The moment when I saw your face

My heart felt silent and your words felt great to me

I felt that love rules the world and not only that moment

You showed me what real love could do to keep me happy

and you fulfilled by dreams with everything that I have today

From this moment I felt you are mine

and I can promise anything to make you happy with my love

When you wrap me in your arms, never felt alone

and you made me to understand the value of love

Like the moon dance between the clouds and the sky

I dance between your heart and soul with my emotions

When the nights became like a romantic world to me

then I felt my moment with you like my dream come true

From that moment your image is deepen in my heart

and want to clutch you in place where you feel enlightened

Like an ocean wave your kisses wet my lips every time

while my foot prints leave mark in the sand with shyness

From this moment there is no one else I could see

other than our two hearts together and love that sets free

These are the moment I want to be with you for ever



Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 29 August 2009

oh! what a great love poem! i congradulate you for keeping such pristine thoughts on your beloved, who must be one of the the luckiest lady in this world. voted 10 surya

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2009

other than our two hearts together and love that sets free These are the moment I want to be with you for ever.........this is what two hearts long fo r each other.... beautiful feelings and well done....10 read mine miss i miss you.#(top 500) .. anywhere...and butterflies around

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A dance of love and romance to set you in perfect harmony with your beloved. Wonderful flow with the magic of your words to create a beautiful poem. 10 love Karin

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Shashendra Amalshan 29 August 2009

Hey this is the most beautiful poem, I have read from yours so far! ! ! filled with emotions, So very lovely... very beautiful indeed! ! yet kinda hurts cause I haven't felt like this ever, and love is all pain for me.. I don't know ever I can write like this.. Fall in love so much beautiful, that is what every one says.. for me it always ends with pain with people..., very nice.. filled with emotions.. love shan

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2009

yes its fine work out! a moment is great! Nice wording! 10+

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 June 2010

‘My heart felt silent and your words felt great to me’ Made silent heart feels always extras …what rippled heart can’t… Silence is nothing but deep engrossment of what is great Nice poetry 10//10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Sreekala Sukumaran 23 May 2010

Wow! Very beautiful poem involves so much with love and feelings... well written enjoyed reading it...Thanks for sharing 10++

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Sandra Fowler 18 April 2010

An eloquent, poetic love letter. Lovely work... Warm regards, Sandra

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2010

At this moment means a lot for me The moment when I saw your face My heart felt silent and your words felt great to me I felt that love rules the world and not only that moment...lovely moments to feel elated and wonderful creation i may term it.....i liked....10 read mine.love at first sight, , , marry to merry....

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Luwi Habte 16 September 2009

At this moment, , , nice poem and nice idea as well thanks for sharing peace luwi

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